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“And fuck my life”

You gripped the flashlight in your hand a bit tighter when the cold wind picked up its speed. The sound of leaves crunching under your steps mixed with the sound of nocturnal animals as they started to make their call. You cursed slightly under your breath and pointed the flashlight ahead, often times turning it towards places where you could hear someone’s presence only for you to later find out that it was just an offense less animal.

You kept the jacket you had on tight against your body, mostly because of the panic attack you were having at the moment. Your attention was always snapped towards any small sound.

And yet you kept walking, trying to find the old building that was supposed to be burnt down.

The moon was doing little to nothing at all casting its light on the forest but due to the trees and branches the light got through because of the little spaces unoccupied by leaves.

Why had you decided to listen to your best friend? You could’ve easily been home today with your boyfriend Tim cuddling under blankets and watching a cheesy romance movie, the one you hated with all of your soul but even so watched them. Yet sadly he had gone off to work on a night shift and left you alone. Vulnerable to your friend’s manipulative ways and in the end you had ended up losing a bet and now you were supposed to go to the old hospital that burned down ten years ago.

Where your friend’s little sister hid your friend’s favorite music CD. Now mind you, you could’ve easily declined and done this in the daylight, where you could actually see. But no. Your friend happens to be a bitch and she wouldn’t take no for an answer.

She wanted you to go alone in the dark with a flashlight that was probably going to run out of batteries any minute no-

The light to the flashlight flickered before it shut. With a frustrated sigh you threw the thing in the ground.

“Fuck! You have got to be kidding me!” You stomped on the floor clearly frustrated. The flashlight rolled until it was stopped by a small boulder and the thing flickered back to life. You frowned but then chuckled.

“Heh, I guess luck’s on my side this time” You went to grab the flashlight but you were stopped dead on your tracks when you swore you saw a blank face looking at you far off in the distance. You squinted your eyes, though it wouldn’t prove to do anything at all seeing you were in darkness.

Your eyes widened and you could already feel your legs shaking.

"Oh god… that thing doesn’t have a face."

You clutched your head in pain as you started to hear static, it echoed in your head and was becoming slightly bothersome. You took in a shaky breath as your eyes started to shift in and out of focus.

But that didn’t stop you from grabbing the flashlight and trying to run away.

You were pretty sure that thing was following you. You barely could walk let alone run. You were amazed you had yet to trip with all of the roots and rocks on the ground. And when you finally saw a building not too far into the distance did you start to run a little bit faster.

Your legs were burning by now and you felt a bit of relief wash over you as you noticed it didn’t have any doors that needed to be open. So running inside, you turned off the flashlight – wanting to save it for later in case you might need it – and made your way inside one of the many rooms.

Sitting down on the floor, you slumped against one of the many walls. Closing your eyes and talking steady breaths, you tried to shake off the image of the faceless creature you had spotted earlier and hoped to the Gods that it hadn’t followed you.

It took you a few minutes to calm down, but when you did you opened your eyes.

In the dark, you could barely make out some things. But you could feel the already decaying paint on the walls on the back of your neck. The dust was everywhere and you sighed. The floor felt dirty, though that was to be expected. As well as the small noises of what you could tell –and hoped- were cockroaches and mice. Anything really as long as it wasn’t threatening.

With one last look around the room, you sat your flashlight besides you and sighed.
“Well, might as well start looking for that damn CD”

With little to no effort, you stood up and grabbed the flashlight. Stretching a little and dusting off any dirt that you acquired during your running spree and decided to look around for a bit.

To be honest you hadn’t found anything at all, except maybe your new fear of old abandoned places. You couldn’t help but feel somewhat scared, yes, you were scared to begin with. But all of this seemed creepy, weird.

You tried to keep your steps at a reasonable sound, not wanting to attract any unwanted attention. But then again your brain would be like:

"What attention? Please, you’re alone."

Yet you knew that wasn’t the case until you heard some cough. You stopped dead in your tracks and turned off the flashlight. You heard some movements going around and then they stopped.

You frowned, the cold sweat ran down your forehead and you let out a breath you didn’t know you were holding in.

“It was just my imagination” You muttered under your breath, taking another step. The coughing came once again and this time you couldn’t help but get scared. Dropping the lantern in the process and watching as it rolled down the hallway.

Your body couldn’t move, frozen in place you watched as the object made contact with a nearby wall, making an audible ‘thud’ that was loud enough due to the silence in the place.

It only took you three seconds to register the fact that the thing, or most likely person, who was coughing. Had stood up, you could hear their footsteps coming out of one of the many empty rooms. And then your eyes met a mask that sent you a shiver down your spine.

Outside the room was a man standing – this you could gather because of his shoulders, you were pretty good at identifying someone’s gender with just a quick look of their shoulder- he was wearing a what you could presume was a brown jacket, jeans and shoes. But what caught your attention was the mask he was wearing.

Your eyes widened at the realization that you had been spotted. And when the man had noticed you, he seemed to stiffen before running.




“Shit! Fuck off!”  You shouted at him and made an attempt to run away, proving to lose him for a couple of seconds when you rounded a corner. You could already see the exit ahead but the sound of the man’s footsteps was what made you try to run faster.

Your heart was beating erratically and you could almost taste the freedom.

A smile you had on your face soon disappeared when your eyes caught the sight of the same thing from before.

“What? No no no no please don’t!” You muttered and when you could hear the static again you cursed.

"Okay, time for plan B."

Taking a sharp turn towards the left you kept on running. You could already hear the footsteps catching up to you and you couldn’t help but actually fear what would happen to you if the man caught you.

His intentions from your previous meeting, told you they weren’t good at all.

“Oh god, what if he’s a drug addic-“ You didn’t have time to finish your thought when you found yourself on the floor, body hurting all over. You tried prying off the man on top of you.

“Get off you freak!” You started to scream obscenities at him and started kicking; all the while he started to punch you and tried to deflect your attacks on him. Finally, your foot connected with what you could say was his shoulder, and when you heard the sound of a ‘pop’ and an agonized cry from him, you smiled in victory and proceeded to try and stand up as quickly as you could.

In the process, successfully snatching the mask he was wearing off of his face.
You stood up and got away from him a good distance, his face was hidden by his hair as he tried to look down.

You could only see him grabbing his shoulder in pain. You had done this before when someone had once tried to rob you.

Stealing a glance at the mask you now held in your hand you couldn’t help but bite your lip.

Should you take it with you?

Snapping your attention back to the man, you noticed he had stood up. Head hanging low, you took a step back in case you needed to escape again, and carefully studied his actions.
All the while a strange feeling was nagging at the back of your mind.

“ He looks like Tim…. But no… Tim… he’s at work. Yeah, that’s right. This is just my imagination playing tricks on me”

Taking another step back as he took another forward. You tried to speak.
“W-What do you want?” You bit your lip and mentally face palmed because of your stutter.
The man remained quiet and instead pointed at you. Slowly he lifted his face a little and you cursed at the fact you couldn’t see his face.

“Why is it so damn dark?”

“Just give me the mask and nobody will end up hurt” His voice was low, gruff. Something about it made you feel uneasy and you clutched the mask to your chest. You shook your head slowly.

“No” It came out as a whisper and you took another step back. Him proceeding to take another closer.

And that’s when finally you could clearly see his face. You dropped the mask to the floor, this making a small thud noise as it fell. The silence that fell upon the two of you could only be described as shocking.

Even in such a dim lighted place, you could clearly make out his features. But what really gave him away were his eyes.

Ice blue eyes.

The same eyes as Tim’s.

One hand went to cover your mouth as you took in the details.

"What is he doing here?!"

“T-Tim?” You smiled a little. “Hey Tim… why… why are you here?” You couldn’t help but feel betrayed. What was he doing here? Why was he wearing that mask? Why was he looking at you like you were crazy?

Before you could say another thing though, you heard footsteps coming alarmingly fast behind you though they were almost silent like, something hit the back of your head and everything went black.
Guess who started to write for Creepypastas again. This girl! owo I decided to do a Masky x Reader because my love for this bastard it's awesome ~ I should've really filter this. Augh .___. so short and ooc and I could've done soooo much better.

Wanna request a fic? :33 -> princesssakura1221.deviantart.…

:iconmaskyplz: :iconhoodieplz: belong to Marble Hornets
You belong to Tim
Story belongs to :iconprincesssakura1221:
Art belongs to :iconhagazusa:
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TheWolfGirlWolfEye Featured By Owner May 19, 2016  New Deviant
capricorn18 Featured By Owner May 3, 2016
Please make another chapter
eunicesakuyaki12 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2016  Student General Artist
First of all, I love this fan fic! I really love it how you put in elements from Marble Hornets and I hope to see more of your fan fics as well. Although, since I go with MH Masky(Black hair and brown eyes who smokes and stuff thing) I still get slightly nerved about people seeing him with blue eyes, but don't worry you're fine. All in all this fan fiction is something worth treasuring!! I mean, it's not like everyday you get to find Marble Hornets x Reader beauties like this one. Great job, man. :D I hope you don't take this in the wrong way. :iconsweatdropplz:
BrownieRaider Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
It seems incomplete. 
PrincessSakura1221 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2016
Hmm, it's not though.
Open ending. 
BrownieRaider Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
I know, Open endings in short stories like these never end well though.
The ending feels like a cliffhanger, while you can decide what happens to reader isn't the point of a oneshot to be more in depth about the two characters your shipping? Y/N x Masky in this case. 
Well, it'd really depend on the type of oneshots you personally like.
I will tell you that there is no other part for this oneshot because it's been three years already since it's been finished, so I see no point in making an ending to something I wrote with the intention of leaving it open-ended. That doesn't excuse the lack of an ending, so I'll explain. 

This fanfic wasn't made with the motive to go into depth of Masky's and Reader's relationship, but it is mentioned that Tim and Reader do have something, it was just a short thing to show that reader doesn't know a lot about Tim because apparently he's running around with a mask in the middle of the night, no explanation whatsoever given to Reader. I left it open with the intention of the reader deciding their own fate.  I'll admit, it's rushed and yes, I will agree with you, in this oneshot, the ending didn't end up well because of said 'rush'. I'll blame it on my poor writing back then, that doesn't change the fact that I feel like the ending should be open. It was just how I visioned it back then and still do right now. 

Not all oneshots need to go into depth of the ship's relationship, like I said, it really depends on what type of oneshots you personally like. I myself enjoy the ones that leave you with a need to know more, because the author did that on purpose. I've read fanfics which make no sense whatsoever but still manage to leave a good impression because of how it's done. I do understand why you asked though, it's extremely frustrating seeing a fanfic that's rushed, has an open-ending that resembles more a cliff-hanger than anything else. That's my fault (the rushing it, therefore making the ending feel like a cliff-hanger, despite the fact that that was not my original intention.)

anyways, I talk too much and hopefully didn't come off as offended by your comment? Because I'm certainly not. Just wanted to say that the point of a oneshots isn't (always) to describe in more depth the relationship between the characters. That's just my opinion though. 
BrownieRaider Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
(I apologize for this ahead of time: I wasn't paying attention to the date) But yeah, I wasn't expecting you to make a part two anyway. lol 
I see... Thank you for your explanation and no you didn't come off offensive at all, XD I honestly thought the moment I looked at this paragraph that I might have angered you, but thank you for your response. 
PrincessSakura1221 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2016
hmm no no don't apologize! haha it's fine uwu
Yup, pretty much thought that it might give off that vibe
you usually don't see people replying with big paragraphs if it isn't to fight
I just talk a lot. <3
BrownieRaider Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
XD Exactly, that's fine by me though. I like a good conversation, just as long as it's not a huge rant.
haleyexe Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2015  Student Photographer
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haleyexe Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2015  Student Photographer
well shit...i cant say i didnt try
SadisticRaven Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2015
This was so good, after reading the comments I am more than disapointed (probably not the right word to use) that there is no continuation...but it allows me to interpret what happens next and imagine whatever a want.  Great story!  
CaileeDoh Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2015
PrincessSakura1221 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2015
fabiha1 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Moar plz
20bluestart02 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2015
Nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!! Y u knock me out to someone that did. (did hoodie that knock me out?)
Anyways please let there be a part two. Please. I beg of you.
EnderWolfPro Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2015

either hoody of freakin Jeff
damnkittyb Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015
Part 2?
PrincessSakura1221 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015
There's no part two. Sorry.
damnkittyb Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015
Okay, it's fine. It just seemed it had other parts to it that's all. (T ^ T)
Kyomiko Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2015
omg this is great! BUT NOW IT NEEDS A PART 2! where is part 2 =(
i also enjoy how in the description you wrote ''you belong to Tim.'' makes me laugh X)
PrincessSakura1221 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2015
I'm happy to know you enjoyed it,
but it's a oneshot and I have no plans on making a second part.
Kyomiko Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2015
yeah so ive read in your comments. its such a cliffhanger tho haha
NekoMinecrafter Featured By Owner May 12, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay... Im confused. But whatever. Also my friend is a B!TCH!
crazydrinkingmayo Featured By Owner May 9, 2015  Student Artist
.........................................WELL THEN, I GUESS I DIED
ButterWolf134 Featured By Owner May 1, 2015
Wait...what happened?
isabellasiddiaj Featured By Owner May 2, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
ButterWolf134 Featured By Owner May 4, 2015
Oh..ok thanks for clearing that up :)
isabellasiddiaj Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Ok guys I make a lot of mini stories and they are weird x3 plz continue reading on.

PrincessSakura1221 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015
Senpai has noticed you c:
Pixie200 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015
I don't want to sound like a snob but his eyes are brown, Im sorry please forgive me! *hides from hate*
PrincessSakura1221 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015
Omg wait
dont tell me I wrote something else but brown
fuck. thats like my biggest pet peeve for Masky reader inserts

I am so sorry, I guess that slipped my mind when I wrote this but its really old anyways ahh 
Mew-Blueberry12 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Part 2 ?
PrincessSakura1221 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015
Sorry, there is no part two.
Mew-Blueberry12 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Aw ok
MoonlightHunter1012 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me : *still holding mask* NUUUU *runs away*
???: *tis trys to knock me out* 
Slender : *stops me dead in my tracks*
Me : Oh S-shit
Masked Man : *tackles me again* GIVE IT BACK
Me : NUUUUUU *disappears to a tree* HAHAHA CANT GET ME NOW
Slender : *grabs me with one of his tendrals*
Me : well shit

Mistpaw89 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
*faints tail sticking up*
DaringDash20 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Did I die or did Timmy boy(why do i always add y and boy at the end!?)kidnap me
Username353 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014

I was looking through other Masky inserts and I found this omg favorited
PrincessSakura1221 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014
oh my gawd
you shouldn't have found this
its so horrible written jfc
LilliphineBlack Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist
Crap did I die! I don't want to die!!!
Bobbypiner Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014
Please make this into a story I love this so much pleaaassseeeee
PrincessSakura1221 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014
sorry, but no. I don't feel like making another part of this as it was meant to be a oneshot.
Bobbypiner Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014
Daawwww okaayyyy
Amberpelt7 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  Student General Artist
hehehehe found you once more .w.
Bobbypiner Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2014
Lmao lets just skip around and scream the wizard of oz lyrics
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